This time I find the drawing a bit more bold with the poses, that is a really good point. Stay trying things like that I can only be a good thing. Now there is a mistake with the arm of the character on the right, or rtaher with her shoulder. the arms foreshortening is ok, bout the shouldr is missing: There should be a round on the shulder. And the angle of her body is a bit akward it lacks width. Now correct that learn from that and you will improve.
I may sound redundant but once again: contrast for the colors of the shade.